Jose
It means strong an
outgoing
It is the number 20
It is like a being a
big bon fire
It’s like going to
the park with my family
It’s the memory of
family
Who taught me
strength and knowledge
Who taught me to be
chill and have a good time
My name is pasted
down from father to son and father to son
My uncle’s name is
Jose
My
great-grandfather’s name is Jose
Jose
It means hanging out
on the porch
Jose
Going to parties and
passing out on the couch
Jose
Making recreational
explosives and setting them off for the 4th of July
Beautiful colors flying threw the sky
Red blue and green dancing in the vivid dark night
Beautiful colors flying threw the sky
Red blue and green dancing in the vivid dark night
Jose
Like a fire in the
darkness
Like a plane in the
sky
Like the freedom of
the ocean
Like a jungle full of
joy
Succulent like a
roasted Puerco
Strong like a silver
back
Slimmer then a Mac
Slimmer then a Mac
Agile like cat
Faster then a bat
Faster then a bat
Jose
It means to love
yourself and love one another
I like how u put Jose after a few lines each time.
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ReplyDeleteExcellent job! Your imagery was very clear and your list of similes really add to the message and strength of your voice.
Your writing was very colorful, I like the different ways you used your rhymes.your poem sounds like it could be made into a song.
ReplyDeleteNice poem but what is a puerco
ReplyDeleteI like the confidence you had while writing this poem
ReplyDelete"Beautiful colors flying threw the sky red blue and green dancing in the vivid dark night" my favorite part
ReplyDeleteNice and vivid images you put in my head I can tell you like your name nice job
ReplyDeleteI like how you used "like the freedom of the ocean"
ReplyDeleteI like all of the similes.
ReplyDeleteI love how you have a stanza of similes one after another.
ReplyDeleteI like the stanzas where you give similes to your name. They're all cool comparisons.
ReplyDeleteThe ending "it means to love yourself and love one another" stuck out a lot to me. Your poem is nice.
ReplyDeleteJose I like how youse repetition in your poem and I like how you said like red blue and green dancing in the vivid dark night.
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