Short story
She was sure this was were she left him. She went into a panic trying to
find him she looked left and right to find him. She then screamed were are you!
She heard a crackle in the bush quickly she draws her dagger ready to impale
anything that appears from the brush. In relief “just a cottontail”, she
continues to look for him. She steps over some leaves and her foot drops into a
hole, she pulls it out quickly and peers into it. Staggered, she sees an eye and
not just any eye the eye of the man. She then starts to dig threw and then
looks to the sky and inhales then exhales she jumps in.
Sup bra good story but when you are talking about her seeing a eye you need a comma because you used the word more then once
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used one of our vocab words from this week, your story was something that I enjoyed reading and I can only imagine what it would be like if it was longer.
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